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Comment: 0,0:03:37.36,0:03:37.40,JapOP,,0,0,0,,OP First Frame
Comment: 0,0:04:55.77,0:04:55.81,Default,,0,0,0,,Part A
Comment: 10,0:06:14.55,0:06:16.12,Default,,0,0,0,,The Star-Plucking Tower?{The Tower of Star Plucking?}{maybe take some liberties with the tl here to make it sound better? like Star Field Tower or something, since you pluck things in fields... (yes I know that suggestion doesn't sound much better)}{How about just "the tower of stars"? -Corbyn}{@@}
Comment: 10,0:08:54.12,0:08:58.99,Default,,0,0,0,,If {???}we're able to seize a star at the top of the Star-Plucking Tower,
Comment: 10,0:09:26.66,0:09:29.59,Default,,0,0,0,,Star plucking is the absolving of sins.
Comment: 10,0:09:29.59,0:09:32.17,Default,,0,0,0,,Star plucking is the miracle of the night.
Comment: 10,0:09:32.86,0:09:37.03,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}With their song to help them, \Nthey arrive at the Star-Plucking Tower.
Comment: 10,0:09:42.78,0:09:47.09,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}They were confined to this tower 500 years ago:
Dialogue: 10,0:01:00.29,0:01:02.79,Default,,0,0,0,,Like with the tam from last year.{literal tl is hood or bandana/kerchief, but I don't really think either is quite right for what they're showing, so just replace this with the correct word}{i don't see anything wrong with hood}
Dialogue: 10,0:01:03.71,0:01:06.21,Default,,0,0,0,,I thought the silhouette was a bit too pronounced,
Dialogue: 10,0:01:06.21,0:01:10.30,Default,,0,0,0,,so I removed the tam to let the jewel on the forehead stand out.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:10.30,0:01:13.02,Default,,0,0,0,,C'est bien. Sounds good to me.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:14.45,0:01:16.05,Default,,0,0,0,,You{ two?} are fortunate.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:16.85,0:01:19.16,Default,,0,0,0,,For you are ignorant of your sins
Dialogue: 10,0:01:19.16,0:01:22.43,Default,,0,0,0,,and the tragedy that will eventually befall you.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:22.91,0:01:26.81,Default,,0,0,0,,The Goddess of Despair's line is different from before!
Dialogue: 10,0:01:26.81,0:01:29.40,Default,,0,0,0,,The others have changed a bit too.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:29.40,0:01:32.32,Default,,0,0,0,,But I think I prefer them this way.
Dialogue: 10,0:01:32.64,0:01:34.05,Default,,0,0,0,,How to put it...
Dialogue: 10,0:01:34.05,0:01:36.55,Default,,0,0,0,,The Goddess of Despair's sadness and...
Dialogue: 10,0:05:29.76,0:05:31.94,Default,,0,0,0,,the book Starlight is based on?{not sure if "original" is overstating it, I'm not sure the word she uses has a specific accepted definition, but the literal tl is just "play book", I'm not sure how to stress the difference between this and the script for the play they're putting on}
Dialogue: 10,0:05:31.94,0:05:33.52,Default,,0,0,0,,I found it in London.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:34.06,0:05:36.91,Default,,0,0,0,,Ah, it's all in English.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:36.91,0:05:38.56,Default,,0,0,0,,I'll translate it for you.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:50.72,0:05:53.58,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I'm sorry I can't do more for you as your teacher.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:54.52,0:05:56.08,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Don't worry about it.
Dialogue: 10,0:05:56.08,0:06:00.08,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}I was just having everyone join{ in addition to their own clubs - I can't figure out a good way to phrase this} to keep the club going.{honestly it seems fine}
Dialogue: 10,0:06:00.62,0:06:03.84,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}They all have their own clubs to worry about.
Dialogue: 10,0:06:04.47,0:06:09.34,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Daiba-san, why don't you apply to Seisho Music Academy?
Dialogue: 10,0:06:57.30,0:07:00.14,Default,,0,0,0,,I was all alone for the longest time.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:01.02,0:07:06.38,Default,,0,0,0,,It was only after coming here that I made friends who I could really create plays with {\i1}together{\i0}.{rearranged slightly to get out of the who/whom conundrum.}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:07.21,0:07:09.76,Default,,0,0,0,,I was able to stand on the stage.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:09.76,0:07:13.34,Default,,0,0,0,,My first stage, and the greatest of friends.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:21.08,0:07:25.92,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}This is the story of goddesses guided by the light of the stars.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:29.92,0:07:35.68,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}This is the story of a distant planet, \Nfrom long ago, in the faraway future.{I'll do the more literal tl here, and you can decide if you want to use the tl from the book at 5:39. and yes, the long ago/faraway future is a contradiction}
Dialogue: 10,0:07:37.47,0:07:42.63,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}It is the summer star festival, celebrated through generations in a small village in a small country.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:42.63,0:07:46.59,Default,,0,0,0,,Below the meteor shower that flies by once every year...
Dialogue: 10,0:07:46.59,0:07:48.67,Default,,0,0,0,,I met Flora...
Dialogue: 10,0:07:48.67,0:07:50.73,Default,,0,0,0,,...and I met Claire...
Dialogue: 10,0:07:50.73,0:07:53.20,Default,,0,0,0,,...in a fated encounter.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:53.68,0:07:57.33,Default,,0,0,0,,I think we two have always been together.
Dialogue: 10,0:07:57.71,0:08:00.58,Default,,0,0,0,,Let us meet here again next year.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:00.89,0:08:03.33,Default,,0,0,0,,On the night of the star festival.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:05.45,0:08:08.34,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}The two are connected by a distant promise.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:10.48,0:08:14.89,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}But on the night of the star festival when they had both turned sixteen...
Dialogue: 10,0:08:14.89,0:08:18.72,Default,,0,0,0,,Claire, we meet again for the first time in a year.
Dialogue: 10,0:08:19.29,0:08:21.23,Default,,0,0,0,,Who are you?
Dialogue: 10,0:08:58.99,0:09:01.02,Default,,0,0,0,,perhaps your memories will...
Dialogue: 10,0:09:01.99,0:09:05.99,Default,,0,0,0,,Let's go, to pluck that star together!{that star -> those stars? pls add to batch notes any recurring lines that you change}{it's late and i'm tired. i'll let you guys decide}{@@ this show's too good}
Dialogue: 10,0:09:07.76,0:09:10.01,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}If you pluck a small star,{from the book: with a small star, you have small happiness. with a big star, you have big wealth. with both, you have eternal fre(edom?)}
Dialogue: 10,0:09:10.01,0:09:13.03,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}you will gain a small amount of happiness.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:13.37,0:09:15.66,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}If you pluck a large star,
Dialogue: 10,0:09:15.66,0:09:18.66,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}you will obtain a great wealth.
Dialogue: 10,0:09:19.04,0:09:21.28,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}If you pluck them both,
Dialogue: 10,0:09:21.28,0:09:24.04,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}you will obtain an eternal wish.
Dialogue: 10,0:10:39.36,0:10:43.24,Default,,0,0,0,,And it shall be bestowed upon you, the star which you have longed for.{uhhh ok I don't know anymore if this should be plural or not. also we translated this as "hold tight the star that you desire" in previous eps}{@@ either way in this case keep the phone one}
Dialogue: 10,0:10:48.18,0:10:50.23,Default,,0,0,0,,My eyes! The light blinds me! {@@ hopefully this is okay, otherwise do The light—The light blinds me!}
Dialogue: 10,0:10:52.57,0:10:55.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Claire? Where are you, Claire?
Dialogue: 10,0:11:08.94,0:11:12.10,Default,,0,0,0,,Our dream was not meant to be.{in context now it seems like this should be first person, "Our dream was not to be" or something. again, batch notes if you change it}{done}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:12.73,0:11:16.90,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Her eyes burned by the light of the stars,\N Flora fell from the tower,
Dialogue: 10,0:11:17.76,0:11:21.28,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}forever parting with Claire.
Dialogue: 10,0:11:23.00,0:11:24.53,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}And high above,
Dialogue: 10,0:11:25.03,0:11:29.15,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}the stars continued to shine for eternity.
Dialogue: 10,0:12:01.28,0:12:02.70,Default,,0,0,0,,Yeah, it is!
Dialogue: 10,0:12:03.95,0:12:07.35,Default,,0,0,0,,This is a treasure! A treasure of a book!
Dialogue: 10,0:12:07.35,0:12:09.83,Default,,0,0,0,,Just look at how old, thick, and heavy it is!{i don't give a fuck what anyone says. the oxford comma stays. -Corbyn}{@@ probably a typo}
Dialogue: 10,0:12:10.18,0:12:12.32,Default,,0,0,0,,It's just a secondhand book I bought.
Dialogue: 10,0:12:12.32,0:12:13.96,Default,,0,0,0,,It's not worth much.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:23.63,0:14:25.63,Default,,0,0,0,,{\i1}Karen-chan jumped in, and...
Dialogue: 10,0:14:28.87,0:14:31.64,Default,,0,0,0,,It's... not Hikari-chan.
Dialogue: 10,0:14:33.50,0:14:37.81,Default,,0,0,0,,The one who changed my reenactment was Karen-chan?
Dialogue: 10,0:15:10.06,0:15:12.67,Default,,0,0,0,,Fruits, fully ripened and plump atop the stage.{+ imagery of being so heavy so as to make the branches droop down, dunno if that comes across in "fully ripened"}{adding plump to help with the imagery}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:12.67,0:15:15.23,Default,,0,0,0,,But they're all soft,
Dialogue: 10,0:15:15.23,0:15:17.20,Default,,0,0,0,,so someone has to protect them.
Dialogue: 10,0:15:17.69,0:15:19.94,Default,,0,0,0,,99th generation, Daiba Nana.{I will never not hear "Dai Banana". -Corbyn}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:57.47,0:16:01.39,Default,,0,0,0,,Starlight is an eternal story told by eight people.{myaa - missed this word}
Dialogue: 10,0:16:01.39,0:16:03.23,Default,,0,0,0,,There is no ninth person.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:03.55,0:16:07.23,Default,,0,0,0,,So Karen-chan, what is your role?
Dialogue: 10,0:16:07.56,0:16:09.24,Default,,0,0,0,,Who in the world are you?{She's clearly Madoka, duh.}
Dialogue: 10,0:16:09.85,0:16:11.74,Default,,0,0,0,,You're not the same Karen-chan as before!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:12.99,0:16:14.48,Default,,0,0,0,,This isn't the same reenactment as before!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:15.32,0:16:17.74,Default,,0,0,0,,What changed since Hikari-chan came?
Dialogue: 10,0:16:18.37,0:16:20.00,Default,,0,0,0,,Why did it change?
Dialogue: 10,0:16:20.54,0:16:23.75,Default,,0,0,0,,What changed with you reuniting with Hikari-chan?!{myaa - maybe this is clearer, she's wondering why exactly them reuniting led to all this (was originally "from", without the "aside")}
Dialogue: 10,0:16:25.48,0:16:29.25,Default,,0,0,0,,I'm gonna Starlight together with Hikari-chan!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:30.75,0:16:32.26,Default,,0,0,0,,I hate it!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:33.15,0:16:35.89,Default,,0,0,0,,I hate Starlight!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:39.26,0:16:43.39,Default,,0,0,0,,To part with a friend you've made is far too cruel of a tragedy!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:44.73,0:16:47.05,Default,,0,0,0,,That's why I'll protect you all.
Dialogue: 10,0:16:47.65,0:16:50.16,Default,,0,0,0,,I {\i1}have{\i0} to protect you
Dialogue: 10,0:16:50.16,0:16:51.92,Default,,0,0,0,,with my reenactment!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:51.92,0:16:53.91,Default,,0,0,0,,If I don't beat you,
Dialogue: 10,0:16:53.91,0:16:56.16,Default,,0,0,0,,my reenactment will come to an end!
Dialogue: 10,0:16:58.99,0:17:00.66,Default,,0,0,0,,That's a non, non, Banana!
Dialogue: 10,0:17:01.66,0:17:04.65,Default,,0,0,0,,Stage girls evolve by the day.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:04.65,0:17:07.43,Default,,0,0,0,,There's no "same us" or "same stage". {@@ pretty sure this was meant to be}
Dialogue: 10,0:17:08.16,0:17:09.67,Default,,0,0,0,,Any stage is a one-time thing.
Dialogue: 10,0:17:09.67,0:17:11.92,Default,,0,0,0,,We burn bright for that instant,{lit. "burn out", so basically burn fierecly on the stage until there's nothing left is the imagery}{there's an idiom for this. i just can't remember what it is right now. someone help -Corbyn}{@@ the word is combust, but it doesn't quite fit}
Dialogue: 10,0:17:12.79,0:17:15.43,Default,,0,0,0,,which is why it's so precious, irreplaceable,
Dialogue: 10,0:17:26.19,0:17:29.20,Default,,0,0,0,,We all have to keep acting out my reenactment forever...{have fun coming up with a way to match that "dame!" at the end (or lose the impact)}{yeah, fuck that.}
Dialogue: 10,0:17:29.69,0:17:30.89,Default,,0,0,0,,Or else!{have fun coming up with a way to match that "dame!" at the end (or lose the impact)}{yeah, fuck that.}
Dialogue: 10,0:17:42.91,0:17:45.14,Default,,0,0,0,,I made a promise with her.{lit. "I will, with her..." but changed it to this to make it less awkward}{seems fine}
Dialogue: 10,0:17:45.99,0:17:48.33,Default,,0,0,0,,I'll go to pluck those stars with Hikari-chan!
Dialogue: 10,0:18:42.33,0:18:45.63,Default,,0,0,0,,So you were always looking out for us, huh.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:46.15,0:18:48.64,Default,,0,0,0,,Again and again, all alone.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:50.05,0:18:52.94,Default,,0,0,0,,I wanted to protect all of you.
Dialogue: 10,0:18:53.68,0:18:56.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Was I in the wrong?
Dialogue: 10,0:19:00.48,0:19:04.95,Default,,0,0,0,,"Men are men; the best sometimes forget."{myaa - just looking at this again, while this *is* the original quote, does this really say the same thing as the japanese? ("even the best sometimes forget themselves/lose control")}{@@ yeah, the japanese are terrible at quotes. I'm glad you understand. I had to deal with this for 75 episodes, when the person quoting never ever said the names of her sources, just things like "austrian poet" who I had to research}
Dialogue: 10,0:19:06.41,0:19:08.83,Default,,0,0,0,,It's a quote by William Shakespeare.
Dialogue: 10,0:19:10.03,0:19:14.01,Default,,0,0,0,,"Time travels in diverse paces with diverse persons."
Dialogue: 10,0:20:20.55,0:20:23.91,Default,,0,0,0,,I've never seen you this happy before.
Dialogue: 10,0:20:23.91,0:20:25.58,Default,,0,0,0,,That's not fair!
Dialogue: 10,0:20:25.58,0:20:28.54,Default,,0,0,0,,I don't know anything about you, Nana.
Dialogue: 10,0:20:30.53,0:20:32.55,Default,,0,0,0,,Maybe I was being too greedy.
Dialogue: 10,0:20:34.67,0:20:37.12,Default,,0,0,0,,To make that year even more fun,
Dialogue: 10,0:20:37.12,0:20:39.82,Default,,0,0,0,,to make us grow even closer,
Dialogue: 10,0:20:39.82,0:20:43.19,Default,,0,0,0,,I'd change the lines up a bit with each reenactment,
Dialogue: 10,0:20:43.19,0:20:45.18,Default,,0,0,0,,and make changes to the performance.{enshutsu is like... super vague. any better ideas?}{tlc}{@@ it's fine, unless you want to say direction or acting}
