01: Misc dialogue tweaks

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FichteFoll 2021-03-05 12:54:57 +01:00
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@ -8,8 +8,9 @@ ScaledBorderAndShadow: yes
YCbCr Matrix: TV.709
[Aegisub Project Garbage]
Audio File: [FGT] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - 01v0 [WEB 1080p EAC3].mkv
Video File: [FGT] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - 01v0 [WEB 1080p EAC3].mkv
Audio File: ../BD raw/[Chyuu-PAS] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - Vol.1 (BD 1080p AAC)/[Chyuu-PAS] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - 01 (BD 1080p AAC) [456D1BEA].mkv
Video File: ../BD raw/[Chyuu-PAS] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - Vol.1 (BD 1080p AAC)/[Chyuu-PAS] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - 01 (BD 1080p AAC) [456D1BEA].mkv
Keyframes File: ../BD raw/[Chyuu-PAS] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - Vol.1 (BD 1080p AAC)/[Chyuu-PAS] Shoujo☆Kageki Revue Starlight - 01 (BD 1080p AAC) [456D1BEA].mkv_keyframes.log
[V4+ Styles]
Format: Name, Fontname, Fontsize, PrimaryColour, SecondaryColour, OutlineColour, BackColour, Bold, Italic, Underline, StrikeOut, ScaleX, ScaleY, Spacing, Angle, BorderStyle, Outline, Shadow, Alignment, MarginL, MarginR, MarginV, Encoding
@ -182,12 +183,12 @@ Dialogue: 5,0:09:07.24,0:09:08.73,Default,,0,0,0,,Auf geht’s!{Alles klar!}{fuc
Dialogue: 5,0:09:09.16,0:09:12.53,Default,,0,0,0,,Bühnenmädchen Aijou Karen entwickelt sich täglich weiter!{The stage girl Aijo Karen is evolving by the day!}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:12.53,0:09:17.03,Default,,0,0,0,,Beim nächsten {\i1}Starlight{\i0} zeige ich euch eine noch bessere Ultrakaren!{During the next Starlight, I'll show the audience an even more bon me!}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:17.76,0:09:18.99,Default,,0,0,0,,Hängen wir uns rein.{Let's do our best.}
Comment: 5,0:09:18.20,0:09:18.99,Overlap,,0,0,0,,Und wie!{Yeah!}{missing line, it's Banana}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:18.20,0:09:18.99,Overlap,,0,0,0,,Ja!{Yeah!}{missing line, it's Banana}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:22.50,0:09:25.00,Default,,0,0,0,,Alles in Ordnung, Karen-chan?{Are you okay, Karen-chan?}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:25.00,0:09:28.94,Default,,0,0,0,,{Ein Sandwich mischt mein Gehirn auf.}Mein Hirn ist voll mit Sandwich.{ヽ( ゚ヮ・)ノ}{A sandwich is circling around in my brain.}{bc they're studying english and the word "sandwich" came up maybe?}{or she's hungry and one of them ate a sandwich for lunch earlier. 「サンドイッチ」 is a pretty common word.}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:28.94,0:09:31.79,Default,,0,0,0,,Es ist noch zu früh, um schlappzumachen.{It's too early to be that tired.}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:31.79,0:09:34.51,Default,,0,0,0,,Karen-chan, das ist das falsche Buch!{Karen-chan! You've got the wrong textbook!}{this line could use some grad-by-char that lowers the font size or opacity}{no}
Comment: 5,0:09:50.34,0:09:50.77,Default,,0,0,0,,What?
Dialogue: 5,0:09:50.34,0:09:50.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Was …?{What?}
Dialogue: 5,0:09:54.98,0:09:57.20,Default,,0,0,0,,Der Tokio Tower?
Dialogue: 5,0:10:02.28,0:10:04.24,Default,,0,0,0,,Wahnsinn!{Wow, amazing!}
Dialogue: 5,0:10:04.24,0:10:07.30,Default,,0,0,0,,Aber was mach ich hier?{Wait. Why am I up here?}{But, wait. What's with this great view?}{I take it that she's generally confused about why she's there?}{tlc}{sounds logical to me. tlc pls confirm <3}{if you want to convey that, make the line "Why am I [all the way] up here?"}
@ -201,7 +202,7 @@ Dialogue: 5,0:10:59.48,0:11:01.76,Default,,0,0,0,,Sei nicht so fies, Banana-chan
Dialogue: 5,0:11:01.76,0:11:04.40,Default,,0,0,0,,Geht es dir wirklich gut, Karen?{Hey, are you okay, Karen?}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:04.40,0:11:05.91,Default,,0,0,0,,Alles paletti. {I'm fine.}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:05.91,0:11:06.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Danke der Nachfrage.{Thanks}{for worrying/asking I guess}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:11.77,0:11:17.75,Default,,0,0,0,,Heute wechselt ein neuer Schüler in unsere Schauspielklasse.{So, today a transfer student will be joining the class.}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:11.77,0:11:17.75,Default,,0,0,0,,Heute wechselt eine neue Schülerin in unsere Schauspielklasse.{So, today a transfer student will be joining the class.}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:17.75,0:11:21.26,Default,,0,0,0,,Ich weiß, das kommt überraschend, aber empfangt sie bitte warm.{I know it's sudden, but make sure to get along.}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:23.92,0:11:26.19,Italic,,0,0,0,,Was für ein seltsamer Traum.{That was a weird dream.}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:26.99,0:11:28.86,Default,,0,0,0,,Ich bin Kagura Hikari.{I'm Kagura Hikari.}
@ -212,12 +213,11 @@ Comment: 5,0:11:38.20,0:11:39.63,Default,,0,0,0,,
Comment: 5,0:11:42.89,0:11:44.89,Default,,0,0,0,,Part B
Dialogue: 5,0:11:46.39,0:11:49.04,Default,,0,0,0,,Hikari-chan?
Dialogue: 5,0:11:49.56,0:11:51.01,Default,,0,0,0,,Aijou!
Comment: 5,0:11:51.01,0:11:51.39,Default,,0,0,0,,
Dialogue: 5,0:11:51.39,0:11:52.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Setz dich hin.{Sit down.}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:52.77,0:11:54.58,Default,,0,0,0,,Entschuldigung.{I'm sorry!}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:54.58,0:11:58.53,Default,,0,0,0,,Kagura-san wechselt vom Königlich Britischen Theaterinstitut hierher.{Kagura-san is a transfer student from Britain's Royal Academy of Theatre}{*almost* the same name as the Royal Academy of Dramatic Art}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:58.53,0:11:59.34,Default,,0,0,0,,Was?{What?}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:59.34,0:12:01.60,Default,,0,0,0,,Sie ist nach 12 Jahren wieder in Japan,{She hasn't been in Japan for 12 years,}{maybe "back to"}{going with "in"}
Dialogue: 5,0:11:59.34,0:12:01.60,Default,,0,0,0,,Sie war seit zwölf Jahren nicht mehr in Japan,{She hasn't been in Japan for 12 years,}{maybe "back to"}{going with "in"}
Dialogue: 5,0:12:01.60,0:12:02.78,Default,,0,0,0,,also helft ihr bitte.{so help her as much as you can.}
Dialogue: 5,0:12:03.13,0:12:04.22,Default,,0,0,0,,Jawohl!{Yes!}
Dialogue: 5,0:12:04.22,0:12:06.82,Default,,0,0,0,,Wer hat heute Klassendienst?{Let's see, the one on duty today is…}
@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ Dialogue: 5,0:16:06.16,0:16:07.96,Default,,0,0,0,,Schade. Trotzdem danke.{Oh wel
Comment: 5,0:16:09.24,0:16:11.20,Default,,0,0,0,,{Hm?}
Dialogue: 5,0:16:11.20,0:16:15.45,Default,,0,0,0,,Kagura Hikari? Hat was vom Auftritt eines neuen Rivalen.{Kagura Hikari, huh? A new rival on our hands?}
Dialogue: 5,0:16:16.06,0:16:20.95,Default,,0,0,0,,Aber ihr Herz ist nicht bei der Sache.{But that girl…} {She doesn't have her heart in it.}{tlc}{just as advice, she's saying this because of the earlier montage when she acted a scene with Hikari}
Comment: 5,0:16:21.43,0:16:22.75,Default,,0,0,0,,{What?}
Dialogue: 5,0:16:21.43,0:16:22.75,Default,,0,0,0,,Hä?{What?}
Dialogue: 5,0:16:27.62,0:16:29.07,Default,,0,0,0,,Hikari-chan?
Dialogue: 5,0:16:29.76,0:16:30.96,Default,,0,0,0,,Hikari-chan …
Dialogue: 5,0:16:33.72,0:16:36.47,Default,,0,0,0,,Hikari-chan!{alpha timing maybe?}{no}