01: Small style adjustments

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@ -66,24 +66,24 @@ Dialogue: 5,0:01:52.95,0:01:55.43,Default,,0,0,0,,Guten Morgen, Karen-chan.
Dialogue: 5,0:01:57.95,0:01:59.95,Default,,0,0,0,,Ja, guten Morgen.{Yeah! Good morning!}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:08.92,0:02:11.85,Default,,0,0,0,,Auf geht’s! Erster!{fucking yoshi, übersetzen wie}{All right, I'm first!}{dunno if "shotgun" would work here?}{it wouldn't.}{Mia ga Ichiban! also consider cutting timing much earlier to match her. actually, I did it anyway}{no idea what you wanted me to do here.}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:24.61,0:02:29.34,AN8,!,0,0,0,,Seishou-Musikakademie, 99. Jahrgang, alphabetisch die Erste:{Seisho Music Academy, \N99th generation}{the 99th group of students to have joined the school, presumably in its 99th year; this term is used when talking about e.g. theatre or idol groups, to refer to "batches" of members, based on when they joined}{, student number 1}{they're just sorted in "alphabetical" order, based on kana}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:29.34,0:02:30.33,AN8,,0,0,0,,Aijou Karen,
Dialogue: 5,0:02:30.33,0:02:31.78,AN8,!,0,0,0,,anwesend!{entering!}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:29.34,0:02:30.33,Default,,0,0,0,,Aijou Karen,
Dialogue: 5,0:02:30.33,0:02:31.78,Default,!,0,0,0,,anwesend!{entering!}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:36.34,0:02:38.34,Italic,,0,0,0,,Zentrum der Bühne, Position Null. {The center of the stage, position zero.}{this is a thought, and should be italicized}
Comment: 5,0:02:38.81,0:02:40.09,Default,,0,0,0,,{Right.}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:40.69,0:02:41.73,Default,,0,0,0,,Mahiru-chan!
Dialogue: 5,0:02:41.73,0:02:42.10,Default,,0,0,0,,Ja?{Hm?}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:42.10,0:02:44.22,Default,,0,0,0,,Dehnen wir uns.{Here, let's stretch.}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:46.01,0:02:47.18,Default,,0,0,0,,Geht klar!{Ah, sure!}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:47.18,0:02:50.48,Default,,0,70,0,,{\an3}Schüler Nummer 17, Tsuyuzaki Mahiru,{Student number 17,\N Tsuyuzaki Mahiru,}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:47.18,0:02:50.48,Default,,0,70,0,,{\an9}Schüler Nummer 17, Tsuyuzaki Mahiru,{Student number 17,\N Tsuyuzaki Mahiru,}
Dialogue: 5,0:02:50.48,0:02:51.73,Default,,0,0,0,,anwesend!
Dialogue: 5,0:03:04.80,0:03:07.76,Default,,0,0,0,,Spürst du es auch ordentlich in Hüften und Hintern?{Make sure you can feel it in your thighs and buttocks.}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:07.76,0:03:09.00,Default,,0,0,0,,Nicht so stark, nicht so stark!{No way, no way!}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:10.39,0:03:13.50,AN8 Overlap,,0,0,0,,Oh, schon offen?{Hm? Oh, it's open.}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:10.39,0:03:13.50,Default,,0,0,0,,Oh, schon offen?{Hm? Oh, it's open.}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:14.98,0:03:18.35,Default,,0,0,0,,Klaro. Heute habe ich Klassendienst!{Naturally! I'm the one on }{day }{duty}{i.e. the person who comes in early and gets things ready (e.g. in a normal classroom they'd erase the blackboard etc)}{today!}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:18.35,0:03:22.14,Default,,0,0,0,,Aijou-san, du hast doch neulich erst verschlafen und warst als letzte hier.{Aijo-san, didn't you oversleep and come in last the other day?}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:22.64,0:03:23.69,Default,,0,0,0,,Ach … {shikawa: dunno if i got right which girl said this}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:24.44,0:03:30.97,AN8 Overlap,,0,0,0,,{\move(960,70,880,70,4000,4200)}Dass ich den Tag noch erlebe, an dem Karen pünktlich aufsteht …{I didn't believe I'd see the day when Karen\N got out of bed on time.}{singing}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:30.97,0:03:32.15,AN8 Overlap,,0,0,0,,Non non, meine Liebe.{That's a non, non!}{non, non is a catchphrase}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:24.44,0:03:30.97,AN8,,0,0,0,,{\move(960,70,880,70,4000,4200)}Dass ich den Tag noch erlebe, an dem Karen pünktlich aufsteht …{I didn't believe I'd see the day when Karen\N got out of bed on time.}{singing}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:30.97,0:03:32.15,AN8,,0,0,0,,Non non, meine Liebe.{That's a non, non!}{non, non is a catchphrase}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:32.55,0:03:36.07,Default,!,0,0,0,,Bühnenmädchen{fee/tänzerin} Aijou Karen entwickelt sich täglich{konstant} weiter!{wächst täglich über sich hinaus! //vlt nicht dumm genug}{The stage girl Aijo Karen is evolving by the day!}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:36.07,0:03:39.90,Default,,0,0,0,,Das hier ist die aktuellste Version. Ich bin Ultrakaren!{Sie ist ultra!} {/sie ist super good.}{The me you see is the newest me, at my most bon!}{she uses "guddo" (good) a lot, if we just keep it as "good" kind of loses its charm; I went for french here since it's easily recognizable, and she uses "non, non" elsewhere, but feel free to go for whatever you like as long as it's something that stands out somehow and sounds just a bit silly (doesn't necessarily need to be another language)}{seems fine}
Dialogue: 5,0:03:42.53,0:03:44.39,Default,,0,0,0,,{Jeez,}Ach Karen-chan,