02: Final touches

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FichteFoll 2018-10-08 14:20:53 +02:00
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2 changed files with 12 additions and 11 deletions

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@ -187,7 +186,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:10:52.02,0:10:55.35,Default,,0,0,0,,Wow, die beiden sind wie elek
Dialogue: 10,0:10:55.35,0:10:57.51,Default,,0,0,0,,Haben sie nicht eher einen Kurzschluss?{Aren't they just having a lively argument?}{pun; kirekire = agile/nimble, kireru = lash out}
Dialogue: 10,0:10:57.97,0:11:01.39,Default,,0,0,0,,Du wurdest nicht auserwählt. Was mischst du dich ein?{Why are you getting in my way when you weren't even chosen?}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:01.76,0:11:03.44,Default,,0,0,0,,Für mich ist das bitterer Ernst!{Mir ist das sehr wichtig!}{I'm serious about this.}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:03.44,0:11:06.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Anders als für dich … Für mich …{Unlike you, I...}{I don't like the repetition, try "Unlike you, I..."}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:03.44,0:11:06.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Anders als für dich …{Unlike you, I...}{I don't like the repetition, try "Unlike you, I..."}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:08.03,0:11:09.02,Default,,0,0,0,,Das reicht.{That's enough.}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:15.71,0:11:17.78,Default,,0,0,0,,Hoshimi-san …
Dialogue: 10,0:11:18.40,0:11:20.46,Default,,0,0,0,,Nicht schlecht, Karen-chan.{Karen-chan, good job.}{fix timing if removing the following line}{I probably fucked the timing, but w/e -Corbyn}
@ -200,7 +199,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:11:27.80,0:11:28.79,Default,,0,0,0,,Hoshimi-san?
Dialogue: 10,0:11:29.18,0:11:30.01,Default,,0,0,0,,Hoshimi!
Dialogue: 10,0:11:30.01,0:11:32.78,Default,,0,0,0,,{Stirb uns nicht weg}Komm wieder zu dir, Hoshimi-san!{Get a hold of yourself, Hoshimi-san!}
Comment: 0,0:11:33.79,0:11:33.83,Default,,0,0,0,,Part B
Dialogue: 10,0:11:35.56,0:11:41.05,AN8,,0,0,0,,Junna-chan hat die letzte Zeit über morgens und mittags alleine trainiert.{Junna-chan has been practicing on her own both in the morning and during lunch lately.}{it covers the eyecatch}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:35.56,0:11:41.05,Default,,0,0,0,,{\move(1080,1010,960,1010,2550,2800)}Junna-chan hat die letzte Zeit über morgens und mittags alleine trainiert.{Junna-chan has been practicing on her own both in the morning and during lunch lately.}{it covers the eyecatch}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:41.94,0:11:44.49,Default,,0,0,0,,Ich leiste ihr Gesellschaft, bis sie wach ist.{I'll stay with her until she wakes up.}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:44.49,0:11:46.81,Default,,0,0,0,,Alles klar. Gib uns dann Bescheid!{Fine. Let me know when she does.}
Dialogue: 10,0:11:46.81,0:11:48.43,Default,,0,0,0,,Hoshimi-san …
@ -229,7 +228,7 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:13:29.92,0:13:33.50,Default,,0,0,0,,Du wurdest nicht auserwählt,
Dialogue: 10,0:13:33.50,0:13:37.42,Default,,0,0,0,,Daher misch dich nicht in unser Vorsingen ein!{Someone like that shouldn't be disrupting our auditions.}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:43.89,0:13:44.98,Default,,0,0,0,,Werde ich aber!{No way!}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:47.03,0:13:49.43,Default,,0,0,0,,Ich werde nicht aufhören!{I'm not dropping out of the auditions!}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:50.36,0:13:51.41,Default,,0,0,0,,Weil
Dialogue: 10,0:13:50.36,0:13:51.41,Default,,0,0,0,,Denn
Dialogue: 10,0:13:51.93,0:13:53.95,Default,,0,0,0,,Mein Herz hat wie wild geklopft,{I mean, my heart was racing!}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:53.95,0:13:55.43,Default,,0,0,0,,als ich Hoshimi-sans Worte hörte.{When Hoshimi-san told me...}{I'm not perfectly sure what she's referring to here tbh; told her about the auditions? said something specific to her?}{tlc}{F: wtf japan}
Dialogue: 10,0:13:57.91,0:14:02.44,Default,,0,0,0,,Egal wie sehr ich mich anstrenge, ich kann sie einfach nicht einholen.{All meine Anstrengungen reichen nicht aus, sie einzuholen.}{Even if I give it my all, I can't catch up to them.}
@ -249,8 +248,8 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:14:51.84,0:14:55.99,Default,,0,0,0,,Eine Chance, aus eigener Kraf
Dialogue: 10,0:14:53.99,0:14:55.99,Default,,0,0,0,,{with my very own shine.}{sounds awkward... supposed to be a noun. glimmer/sparkle/something? or maybe rephrase to keep the "shine"}{OH YES DOKI DOKI SUNSHINE}{it's Aikatsu}
Dialogue: 10,0:14:56.32,0:15:00.19,Default,,0,0,0,,in der Mitte der Bühne zu stehen, \Ninmitten des Rampenlichts.{At the center of the stage, in the middle of the spotlight.}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:01.00,0:15:05.00,Default,,0,0,0,,Ich könnte tatsächlich ein Star werden!{I might be able to become one—a real}{just filler}{ star.}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:08.15,0:15:12.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Deine Wiederkehr hat meine Augen geöffnet. {Ever since you came back, I've been feeling like I've finally woken up from a daze.}{changed tense}{this isn't right, it's I've felt like I've}{fuck present perfect}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:16.52,0:15:19.19,Default,,0,0,0,,Der Traum, zusammen {Stars zu werden}nach Sternen zu greifen … {Becoming stars together...}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:08.15,0:15:12.77,Default,,0,0,0,,Deine Rückkehr hat meine Augen geöffnet. {Ever since you came back, I've been feeling like I've finally woken up from a daze.}{changed tense}{this isn't right, it's I've felt like I've}{fuck present perfect}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:16.52,0:15:19.19,Default,,0,0,0,,Dieser Traum, zusammen zu Sternen zu werden{nach den Sternen zu greifen} … {Becoming stars together...}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:19.19,0:15:23.05,Default,,0,0,0,,Ich will diesen Traum verwirklichen.{In order to make that dream come true, I guess.}{the nuance here is that it's not necessarily *just* to make the dream come true; she wants to "starlight" with hikari either way. "In order to make that dream come true, you could say..."}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:24.46,0:15:27.77,Default,,0,0,0,,So oder so, ich will mit dir im Sternenlicht baden!{Anyway, Hikari-chan, I want to Starlight with you!}{I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going}{pretty sure Anyway requires a comma}
Dialogue: 10,0:15:28.62,0:15:30.28,Default,,0,0,0,,Karen …
@ -329,11 +328,11 @@ Dialogue: 10,0:22:39.26,0:22:42.07,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Ich habe
Dialogue: 10,0:22:47.06,0:22:48.30,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Gut gemacht.{Das war super.}{Nice job.}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:51.15,0:22:53.73,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Denke ich einfach zu viel nach?{Could I be overthinking it?}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:53.73,0:22:54.74,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Hä?{Huh?}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:54.74,0:22:57.56,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Deine primitive Art scheint schließlich stärker zu sein.{I mean, the simple-minded \Napproach seems more powerful.}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:54.74,0:22:57.56,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Deine primitive Art scheint \Nschließlich stärker zu sein.{I mean, the simple-minded \Napproach seems more powerful.}
Dialogue: 10,0:22:57.56,0:23:01.57,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Was, primitiv? Das ist gemein.{What? Simple-minded? \NThat's mean!}
Dialogue: 10,0:23:01.57,0:23:03.82,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Und hopp!{There we go.}
Dialogue: 10,0:23:05.67,0:23:08.12,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Das ist noch nicht \Ndas Ende, stimmt’s?{But this isn't the \Nend of it, right?}
Dialogue: 10,0:23:08.12,0:23:10.70,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Also muss ich mich noch bis zum Schluss anstrengen.{In that case, all I have to do \Nis give my all until the end.}
Dialogue: 10,0:23:08.12,0:23:10.70,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Also muss ich mich noch \Nbis zum Schluss anstrengen.{In that case, all I have to do \Nis give my all until the end.}
Dialogue: 10,0:23:10.70,0:23:13.08,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Ich tue alles in meiner Macht, \Num ein Star zu werden.{I'll aim to become \Na star with all my might.}
Dialogue: 10,0:23:16.80,0:23:17.58,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Nicht wahr?{Right?}
Dialogue: 10,0:23:19.55,0:23:20.83,Default,,0,0,0,,{\pos(1050,1010)\an3}Hoshimi-san!

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Comment: 0,0:11:42.89,0:11:44.89,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,POST EYECATCHER,
Dialogue: 0,0:11:33.79,0:11:36.30,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnFlickner\blur0.5\fs30\c&HF1F1F1&\pos(323,1032)}Mädchensingspiel Revue Starlight
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Dialogue: 0,0:17:49.92,0:17:55.92,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\an4\blur0.7\bord0\shad0\fscx817\fscy150\p1\pos(567.333,101)}m 0 0 l 100 0 100 2 0 2
Dialogue: 1,0:17:49.92,0:17:55.92,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnGentium Basic\fs62\blur0.6\c&HFFFFFF&\pos(960,60)}Revue der Begierde
Comment: 0,0:18:49.40,0:18:51.40,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,THIS IS JUNNA,
Dialogue: 1,0:18:51.40,0:18:56.40,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnMyriad Pro\blur0.5\fs30\b1\bord0.4\blur3\c&H000000&\pos(321.382,273.858)}8 Jahre
Dialogue: 2,0:18:51.40,0:18:56.40,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnMyriad Pro\blur0.5\fs30\b1\blur0.3\pos(321.382,273.858)}8 Jahre
Dialogue: 1,0:18:51.40,0:18:56.40,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnMyriad Pro Light\blur0.5\fs30\b1\bord0.4\blur3\c&H000000&\pos(321.382,273.858)}8 Jahre
Dialogue: 2,0:18:51.40,0:18:56.40,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnMyriad Pro Light\blur0.5\fs30\b1\blur0.3\pos(321.382,273.858)}8 Jahre
Dialogue: 1,0:18:51.40,0:18:56.40,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnGentium Basic\blur0.7\fs40\bord0.4\blur3\c&H000000&\pos(321.286,211.143)}Hoshimi Junna
Dialogue: 2,0:18:51.40,0:18:56.40,Tenebris-signs,,0,0,0,,{\fnGentium Basic\blur0.7\fs40\blur0.3\pos(321.286,211.143)}Hoshimi Junna
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